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Post by Sue Johnson on Dec 18, 2009 17:44:43 GMT -5
Name: Susan (Sue) Johnson
Wanted Position: Fifth year Gryffindor
Abilities: She doesn't really know about any abilities yet. She is part werewolf, from her grandfather, and does transform. It didn't get passed onto her mother though, it skipped a generation.
History: Susan was born in Britain, but lived most of her life in France after her parents bitter separation. She hated both of her parents for it for a while, but got over it. She saw her father every now again when she visited Britain, but never really stayed long. She is somewhat confident in herself, and loves to be around people. She has two sides to herself; the nice, friendly side; and then the not nice, in a bad mood and just wants you to go away side. Sue tries to be nice as much as she can, and not be rude. When it's around the time of the full moon, though, she can't help if she is in a bad mood, even if she enjoys being a wolf.
Physical Description: Susan is blonde, quite slender (which she is proud of) but has hips. Her hair is curly and reaches the middle of her back. Her eyes are hazel, but turn red sometimes, depending on her mood. As a wolf, she has dark brown fur that is shiny. Her eyes are the same.
Where Did You Find Us?: A friend referred me!
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fallon grimwood
ministress of magic
deputy ministress of magic dueling coach wandless magic apparition
[b]keep your mouth shut.[/b][br]keep your guard up.[br][i]I swear I'll make it right.[/i]
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Post by fallon grimwood on Dec 18, 2009 18:01:13 GMT -5
Your character strikes me as a bit of a Sue. I'd like to ask that you revise your powers and reconsider the color changing eyes, at least make them only change to one other color instead of two.
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Post by Sue Johnson on Dec 20, 2009 17:14:56 GMT -5
okay! i revised it, so tell me what you think as soon as you can, please!
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fallon grimwood
ministress of magic
deputy ministress of magic dueling coach wandless magic apparition
[b]keep your mouth shut.[/b][br]keep your guard up.[br][i]I swear I'll make it right.[/i]
Posts: 96
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Post by fallon grimwood on Dec 21, 2009 13:15:34 GMT -5
I still feel like your power doesn't fit. If you want a power might I suggest using one listed on the site's list of powers or perhaps going without a power for a while until you've rped enough to find one that fits your character?
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Post by Sue Johnson on Dec 21, 2009 14:27:36 GMT -5
that sounds good. i was having trouble figuring out a power in the first place, so I'll probably wait until my character has grown enough for me to find something that fits. Thanks!
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fallon grimwood
ministress of magic
deputy ministress of magic dueling coach wandless magic apparition
[b]keep your mouth shut.[/b][br]keep your guard up.[br][i]I swear I'll make it right.[/i]
Posts: 96
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Post by fallon grimwood on Dec 21, 2009 16:21:57 GMT -5
Ok, sounds good. I'll sort you now then.
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fallon grimwood
ministress of magic
deputy ministress of magic dueling coach wandless magic apparition
[b]keep your mouth shut.[/b][br]keep your guard up.[br][i]I swear I'll make it right.[/i]
Posts: 96
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Post by fallon grimwood on Dec 21, 2009 16:23:12 GMT -5
PS: Remember to change your display name!
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